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 - present yourself
-  - hi, i am m NAME
+  - hi, i am NAME
   - i am a PhD student at GROUP
   - with my PIs NAMES
   - i will talk about TITLE
-    - about quantum materials simulation, and how we can and why we should
-      evolve it from physics-based to hybrid physics/AI
+    - about quantum materials simulation, and why and how we evolve it from
+      physics-based to hybrid physics/AI
 - transition
   - I want to tell you about what led me to this position, from all the way back
     to the beginning
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   into calcium carbonate. So as long as modern civilization.
 - I heard this saying once. "If cancer is not solved in our lifetime, the world
   will stay the same, unfortunate as it is. If *this* problem [point to screen]
-  is not solved in our lifetime, the world will become a different place."
+  is not solved in our lifetime, the world will become a different place." One
+  that our civilization has not yet encountered. But we can avoid that societal
+  risk by decarbonizing.
 ** Slide Energy mix
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+- [click]
 - The problem is that it is actually very hard to find an develop a new
   material. Just look at this list.
 - This pace of progress is too slow for what we are facing now
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   approximation of the Schrödinger equation and allows to calculate any propetry
   of a material or molecule based on its structure alone.
 - Before LLMs came along, it occupied the largest share of supercomputers
-  worldwide. And even with that, it cannot even scratch the surface of of the
-  traversable materials space due to its scaling.
+  worldwide. But even with that, it cannot even scratch the surface of of the
+  traversable materials space, due to its scaling behavior.
+- So it is also too slow for what we are facing
 ** Slide Industry research
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 - [click]
 - So it is unsurprising that the big artificial intelligence players are coming
   into this field.
-- Since only last year, Google, Microsoft, Meta and Asian companies have
+- Since only last year, Google, Microsoft, Meta and other companies have
   published large models that disruptively accelerate materials discovery, they
   say
 - So, AI to the rescue
-- Let me point out a conundrum here. I said computing has a power poroblem, and
-  I propose to solve it with more computing. Then I said that AI makes it worse,
-  and I propose to solve it with more AI. But, if we use this for enabling a
-  distruptive technology like quantum materials, then it changes the game.
-  Potentially for all materials and thus all energy technologies. And hopefully,
-  in time.
+- [click]
+- Let me point out a seeming conundrum here. I said computing has a power
+  poroblem, and I propose to solve it with more computing. Then I said that AI
+  makes it worse, and I propose to solve it with more AI. But, if we use this
+  for enabling a distruptive technology like quantum materials, then it changes
+  the game. Potentially for all materials and thus all energy technologies. And
+  hopefully, in time.
 - So, happy end?
 ** Slide All-electron DFT, JuDFT
 :PROPERTIES:

presentation/mainmatter/introduction.tex

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 \begin{frame}[c,plain]
         % \frametitle{}
         \begin{center}
-          {\Huge \textcolor{fzjblue}{What is the most important problem right
-              now?*}}
+          {\Huge \textcolor{fzjblue}{What is the most important problem,}}
+
+          \vspace*{1em}
+          {\Huge \textcolor{fzjblue}{right now?*}}
 
           \vspace*{2em}
-          \uncover<2->{{\scriptsize *imho}}
+          \uncover<2->{{\normalsize *imho}}
         \end{center}
 \end{frame}
 
@@ -338,7 +340,8 @@
 
 % Slide The full pipeline
 \begin{frame}
-  \frametitle{The full proposed hybrid pipeline}
+  \frametitle{The full proposed hybrid physics/AI pipeline}
+  \framesubtitle{For all-electron DFT codes}
   % \framesubtitle{\href{https://go.fzj.de/wasmer}{go.fzj.de/wasmer}}
   \vspace*{0em}